NeoBook Reviewers

Thank you so much for offering to help create the first NeoBook!

You can review Klaus's current draft here. 

At this point, we're not doing line edits or anything that detailed. We'd like to know, does this read like a book, and if not, what would make it so? Are there gaps in the logic or narrative? Are elements missing altogether? Does the text read well? 

We're meeting Mondays at 10:30am PT in my Zoom, if you want to join. Our Mattermost channel is here. 

And this page describes NeoBooks, so you can grok the thing we're aiming for.